You have a good understanding of this scene and use some literary terminology, but your commentary shifts from analysis to explanation. Approach your analysis with a greater appreciation of this as a crafted piece of writing by Munro. Continually refer to her and what she intentionally included in this text and why/what the effect is.
It is important to speak clearly, but try to build your confidence with these texts as to help you take fewer pauses and condense your sentences. At five minutes your introduction is twice as long as it should be. This will dilute your analysis and impact your organization score.
You have a good understanding of this scene and use some literary terminology, but your commentary shifts from analysis to explanation. Approach your analysis with a greater appreciation of this as a crafted piece of writing by Munro. Continually refer to her and what she intentionally included in this text and why/what the effect is.
ReplyDeleteIt is important to speak clearly, but try to build your confidence with these texts as to help you take fewer pauses and condense your sentences. At five minutes your introduction is twice as long as it should be. This will dilute your analysis and impact your organization score.